Nice song! There's a lot of variety which I like. There some mixing inconsistencies for example around :57 when the snare and rest of the drums comes in there's some distortion in the snare, I'm not sure if that's intentional but I just thought you'd like to know! In the beginning the high synth is a little harsh on the ears. Overall, the song is kinda bare it just feels like it's missing something but I'm unsure what the problem is mainly around :28 to :38. I think what it might need is a little more chordal synths in the background. But other than that, it has a lot of potential and for that, I am scouting you! I look forward to future songs :)
Sorry if this came off as harsh, it isn't my intention I promise!